Fake did it seem,
The love so cold,
The pain so ruthless,
Meaner was you & Weaker was I.
For fake was you & real the Illusion.
The weaker I grew the stronger the Illusion.
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- shruti
- I feel like a tiny 'DOT' in this vast expanse of d world,trying hard to make it visible.I like to live in d dungeons of my mind.M focussed & like d pole star(rigid yet so bright).Life for me is a relentless struggle,a pursuit of wisdom not of power!
Loved the last 2 lines...at its oxymoronic best :) Too good :) That's the height of profoundness in thought process.. Inspired me to re-start blogging :)
ReplyDeleteSuggestion: 'Meaner were you' and 'fake were you' are grammatically correct and sound correct..no denial of poetic rights haan... deviation from sound English grammar concerns me :) :(
wow!my writing's aren't that g8 to motivate.these are th8s that just pass by and i like penning them down.
ReplyDeletetake the "were" 's !! though it was a deliberate attempt,gd u noticed !!
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